Mr Sticky
No one knew how Mr. Sticky got in the fish tank.
"He's very small," Mum said as she peered at the tiny water snail. "Just a black dot."
"He'll grow," said Abby and pulled her pyjama bottoms up again before she got into bed. They were always falling down.
In the morning Abby jumped out of bed and switched on the light in her fish tank.
Gerry, the fat orange goldfish, was dozing inside the stone archway. Jaws was already awake, swimming along the front of the tank with his white tail floating and twitching. It took Abby a while to find Mr. Sticky because he was clinging to the glass near the bottom, right next to the gravel.
At school that day she wrote about the mysterious Mr. Sticky who was so small you could mistake him for a piece of gravel. Some of the girls in her class said he seemed an ideal pet for her and kept giggling about it.
That night Abby turned on the light to find Mr. Sticky clinging to the very tiniest, waviest tip of the pond weed. It was near the water filter so he was bobbing about in the air bubbles.
"That looks fun," Abby said. She tried to imagine what it must be like to have to hang on to things all day and decided it was probably very tiring. She fed the fish then lay on her bed and watched them chase each other round and round the archway. When they stopped Gerry began nibbling at the pond weed with his big pouty lips. He sucked Mr. Sticky into his mouth then blew him back out again in a stream of water. The snail floated down to the bottom of the tank among the coloured gravel.
"I think he's grown a bit," Abby told her Mum at breakfast the next day.
"Just as well if he's going to be gobbled up like that," her Mum said, trying to put on her coat and eat toast at the same time.
"But I don't want him to get too big or he won't be cute anymore. Small things are cute aren't they?"
"Yes they are. But big things can be cute too. Now hurry up, I'm going to miss my train."
At school that day, Abby drew an elephant. She needed two pieces of expensive paper to do both ends but the teacher didn't mind because she was pleased with the drawing and wanted it on the wall. They sellotaped them together, right across the elephant's middle. In the corner of the picture, Abby wrote her full name, Abigail, and drew tiny snails for the dots on the 'i's The teacher said that was very creative.
At the weekend they cleaned out the tank. "There's a lot of algae on the sides," Mum said. "I'm not sure Mr. Sticky's quite up to the job yet."
They scooped the fish out and put them in a bowl while they emptied some of the water. Mr. Sticky stayed out of the way, clinging to the glass while Mum used the special 'vacuum cleaner' to clean the gravel. Abby trimmed the new pieces of pond weed down to size and scrubbed the archway and the filter tube. Mum poured new water into the tank.
"Where's Mr. Sticky?" Abby asked.
"On the side," Mum said. She was busy concentrating on the water. "Don't worry I was careful."
Abby looked on all sides of the tank. There was no sign of the water snail.
"He's probably in the gravel then," her mum said. "Come on let's get this finished. I've got work to do." She plopped the fish back in the clean water where they swam round and round, looking puzzled.
That evening Abby went up to her bedroom to check the tank. The water had settled and looked lovely and clear but there was no sign of Mr. Sticky. She lay on her bed and did some exercises, stretching out her legs and feet and pointing her toes. Stretching was good for your muscles and made you look tall a model had said on the t.v. and she looked enormous. When Abby had finished, she kneeled down to have another look in the tank but there was still no sign of Mr. Sticky. She went downstairs.
Her mum was in the study surrounded by papers. She had her glasses on and her hair was all over the place where she'd been running her hands through it. She looked impatient when she saw Abby in the doorway and even more impatient when she heard the bad news.
"He'll turn up." was all she said. "Now off to bed Abby. I've got masses of work to catch up on."
Abby felt her face go hot and red. It always happened when she was angry or upset.
"You've hoovered him up haven't you," she said. You were in such a rush you hoovered him up."
"I have not. I was very careful. But he is extremely small."
"What's wrong with being small?"
"Nothing at all. But it makes things hard to find."
"Or notice," Abby said and ran from the room.
The door to the bedroom opened and Mum's face appeared around the crack. Abby tried to ignore her but it was hard when she walked over to the bed and sat next to her. She was holding her glasses in her hand. She waved them at Abby.
"These are my new pair," she said. "Extra powerful, for snail hunting." She smiled at Abby. Abby tried not to smile back.
"And I've got a magnifying glass," Abby suddenly remembered and rushed off to find it.
They sat beside each other on the floor. On their knees they shuffled around the tank, peering into the corners among the big pebbles, at the gravel and the pondweed.
"Ah ha!" Mum suddenly cried.
"What?" Abby moved her magnifying glass to where her mum was pointing.
There, tucked in the curve of the archway, perfectly hidden against the dark stone, sat Mr. Sticky. And right next to him was another water snail, even smaller than him.
"Mrs Sticky!" Abby breathed. "But where did she come from?"
"I'm beginning to suspect the pond weed don't you think?"
They both laughed and climbed into Abby's bed together, cuddling down under the duvet. It was cozy but a bit of a squeeze.
"Budge up," Mum said, giving Abby a push with her bottom.
"I can't, I'm already on the edge."
"My goodness you've grown then. When did that happen? You could have put an elephant in here last time we did this."
Abby put her head on her mum's chest and smiled.
Comments
I liked this story it made me feel all warm inside
I liked this story it made me feel all warm inside
it was the best story I ever read thanks
it was the best story I ever read thanks
Its a very nice story. It was a bit long for a short story..
Its a very nice story. It was a bit long for a short story for children. Otherwise it was perfect.
great story line man
great story line man
it was a cute story
it was a cute story
Personally i didnt think that this was a very good story..
Personally i didnt think that this was a very good story for children at all. I believe it was entertianing for kids to sit through and listen to but i think that it is setting the kids up to get disappointed about somthing or another. There parents are going to make mistakes, trust me i would know. And this stroy just has a happy little ending which i guess most childrens stories do but this is just expecting parents to be perfect and they will never make a mistake which isnt true.
This is a great story for when I baby sit every Monday.
This is a great story for when I baby sit every Monday.
it was a cute story to read
it was a cute story to read
how good can it get
how good can it get
The story was GREAT! Id like to be an author one day. You..
The story was GREAT! Id like to be an author one day. You have showed me something and i will follow.
personaly. i thought it was a great story. --tasha.
personaly.
i thought it was a great story.
--tasha.
This story is very,very very boring. So disappointing.
This story is very,very very boring. So disappointing.
It is a very interesting story even though i do not..
It is a very interesting story even though i do not understand some words.
very very very very very odd.........
very very very very very odd.........
Mo, this is the second story Ive read of yours and I love..
Mo, this is the second story Ive read of yours and I love it even more than the first.
The relationship between Abby and her Mum is what I love the most about your stories. Its just so real. Your story displays a glimpse of the ups and downs of mother/daughter relationship (at least with a young daughter). You dont gloss over them. You use them to propel the story forward.
The Mom is busy. It happens. The daugter is feeling neglected by her mothers business. The daughter then equates the seeming "neglect" to being small and not noticeable like her little Sticky.
The story ended well without a sermon. :0)
This was a great story for my child to read. We were able..
This was a great story for my child to read. We were able to discuss alot about different emotions. We used this for his weekly reading lesson. Very easy to understand. Great read for younger children to comprehend.
my 3 year old daughter liked this story a great deal. It..
my 3 year old daughter liked this story a great deal. It was a nice change to the familiar stories we always read. thank you
I was working on my laptop in bed when my daughter, fresh..
I was working on my laptop in bed when my daughter,
fresh from a nightmare, joined me. I googled short
bedtime story, and up popped Mr. Sticky. Thank you
for such a sweet story that has my daughter sleeping
deeply with a smile on her face.
Ireally like the name and it is a pritty good story!
Ireally like the name and it is a pritty good story!
I liked this story well enough, and my son (age 8) liked..
I liked this story well enough, and my son (age 8) liked it.
The one critique I have, is there are so many scenes where the reader is lead astray...lots of "details" that add nothing to the story, and leave the reader wondering.
I think the story would be much better with about a quarter of it edited out.
-S
I liked this story. I liked that it was sad until you find..
I liked this story. I liked that it was sad until you find out that Mr Sticky is a mom and was hiding. Cambria (age 6)
the story is nice........
the story is nice........
the story was ok
the story was ok
This story bored me a little because there was no real..
This story bored me a little because there was no real meaning to it i guess it would be okay for small kids but as an 11 year old i did not like it! Sorry
great story dudes!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great story dudes!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was the werst stor i have ever read
it was the werst stor i have ever read
it was ok
it was ok
The story was cool. I enjoyed it.
The story was cool. I enjoyed it.
good story 5 stars
good story 5 stars
nice name that gets my attention. well done.;)
nice name that gets my attention. well done.;)
hello grate story, you know why its a good story because..
hello grate story, you know why its a good story because its nice and short good job i hope u do more short storys well done :)
it was the nicest story that i have ever read
it was the nicest story that i have ever read
This is a very good story.
This is a very good story.
It is good only for small children below 3 years. Meghana.
It is good only for small children below 3 years.
Meghana.
soooooooooooooooooooooo cul, fab and brilliant. a great..
soooooooooooooooooooooo cul, fab and brilliant. a great facination
happy story
happy story
it is a really good and creative story but there is too..
it is a really good and creative story but there is too much punctuation like apostrophes. Jus lower down on that then it will be a very interesting story.
Too boring as nothing really happened. Too repetitive. A..
Too boring as nothing really happened. Too repetitive. A bit confusing, not sure what was going on. Enjoyed the humour, quite funny. Better for younger children year 1 or 2.
i think it was ok but it should be smaller a bit but it was..
i think it was ok but it should be smaller a bit but it was ok in a way kk
lil emily it was very marveles and i found it interstitrng..
lil emily
it was very marveles and i found it interstitrng also is a pectfect story
That Story was adorable I mean Aww It was kinda true I..
That Story was adorable I mean
Aww It was kinda true I felt her pain lol
cuteeeeee story
This story was really cute .... I am going to the Sixth..
This story was really cute ....
I am going to the Sixth Grade but it was a real good story to read while i was bored ....
I reccomend this story to 2nd - 4th graders
It is a happy girl and lovely mum; that is good to..
It is a happy girl and lovely mum;
that is good to children;
I like it;
Im a foreigner learning English and find that your stories..
Im a foreigner learning English and find that your stories help me a lot.
Novels are too long and tiring to read.
4 pages should be the maximum. They help me write letters home by the expressions and ideas.
I loved mr. sticky! he is soooooo inspiring. I am 12 and..
I loved mr. sticky! he is soooooo inspiring. I am 12 and it is amusing. great job with bringing the relationship between mom and daughter in. It was really an enjoyable story.
~Rachel~
for my, that I´m from venezuela is wanderfull,..
for my, that I´m from venezuela is wanderfull, congratulation to every body
thanks.joshua.
aww... dis is cute
aww...
dis is cute
i feel overall the story lacks structure in the sense that..
i feel overall the story lacks structure in the sense that
the author tried to do too much at times...Overall, the
story was average, and i would re-read again with a
few revisions.
i love it is so cute very very good good job nice i like to..
i love it is so cute very very good good job nice i like to much the story.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story is so cute. I feel that kids can relate to it..
This story is so cute. I feel that kids can relate to it in one way or another. Im using it over break with my speech kids!
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