Mr Sticky
No one knew how Mr. Sticky got in the fish tank.
"He's very small," Mum said as she peered at the tiny water snail. "Just a black dot."
"He'll grow," said Abby and pulled her pyjama bottoms up again before she got into bed. They were always falling down.
In the morning Abby jumped out of bed and switched on the light in her fish tank.
Gerry, the fat orange goldfish, was dozing inside the stone archway. Jaws was already awake, swimming along the front of the tank with his white tail floating and twitching. It took Abby a while to find Mr. Sticky because he was clinging to the glass near the bottom, right next to the gravel.
At school that day she wrote about the mysterious Mr. Sticky who was so small you could mistake him for a piece of gravel. Some of the girls in her class said he seemed an ideal pet for her and kept giggling about it.
That night Abby turned on the light to find Mr. Sticky clinging to the very tiniest, waviest tip of the pond weed. It was near the water filter so he was bobbing about in the air bubbles.
"That looks fun," Abby said. She tried to imagine what it must be like to have to hang on to things all day and decided it was probably very tiring. She fed the fish then lay on her bed and watched them chase each other round and round the archway. When they stopped Gerry began nibbling at the pond weed with his big pouty lips. He sucked Mr. Sticky into his mouth then blew him back out again in a stream of water. The snail floated down to the bottom of the tank among the coloured gravel.
"I think he's grown a bit," Abby told her Mum at breakfast the next day.
"Just as well if he's going to be gobbled up like that," her Mum said, trying to put on her coat and eat toast at the same time.
"But I don't want him to get too big or he won't be cute anymore. Small things are cute aren't they?"
"Yes they are. But big things can be cute too. Now hurry up, I'm going to miss my train."
At school that day, Abby drew an elephant. She needed two pieces of expensive paper to do both ends but the teacher didn't mind because she was pleased with the drawing and wanted it on the wall. They sellotaped them together, right across the elephant's middle. In the corner of the picture, Abby wrote her full name, Abigail, and drew tiny snails for the dots on the 'i's The teacher said that was very creative.
At the weekend they cleaned out the tank. "There's a lot of algae on the sides," Mum said. "I'm not sure Mr. Sticky's quite up to the job yet."
They scooped the fish out and put them in a bowl while they emptied some of the water. Mr. Sticky stayed out of the way, clinging to the glass while Mum used the special 'vacuum cleaner' to clean the gravel. Abby trimmed the new pieces of pond weed down to size and scrubbed the archway and the filter tube. Mum poured new water into the tank.
"Where's Mr. Sticky?" Abby asked.
"On the side," Mum said. She was busy concentrating on the water. "Don't worry I was careful."
Abby looked on all sides of the tank. There was no sign of the water snail.
"He's probably in the gravel then," her mum said. "Come on let's get this finished. I've got work to do." She plopped the fish back in the clean water where they swam round and round, looking puzzled.
That evening Abby went up to her bedroom to check the tank. The water had settled and looked lovely and clear but there was no sign of Mr. Sticky. She lay on her bed and did some exercises, stretching out her legs and feet and pointing her toes. Stretching was good for your muscles and made you look tall a model had said on the t.v. and she looked enormous. When Abby had finished, she kneeled down to have another look in the tank but there was still no sign of Mr. Sticky. She went downstairs.
Her mum was in the study surrounded by papers. She had her glasses on and her hair was all over the place where she'd been running her hands through it. She looked impatient when she saw Abby in the doorway and even more impatient when she heard the bad news.
"He'll turn up." was all she said. "Now off to bed Abby. I've got masses of work to catch up on."
Abby felt her face go hot and red. It always happened when she was angry or upset.
"You've hoovered him up haven't you," she said. You were in such a rush you hoovered him up."
"I have not. I was very careful. But he is extremely small."
"What's wrong with being small?"
"Nothing at all. But it makes things hard to find."
"Or notice," Abby said and ran from the room.
The door to the bedroom opened and Mum's face appeared around the crack. Abby tried to ignore her but it was hard when she walked over to the bed and sat next to her. She was holding her glasses in her hand. She waved them at Abby.
"These are my new pair," she said. "Extra powerful, for snail hunting." She smiled at Abby. Abby tried not to smile back.
"And I've got a magnifying glass," Abby suddenly remembered and rushed off to find it.
They sat beside each other on the floor. On their knees they shuffled around the tank, peering into the corners among the big pebbles, at the gravel and the pondweed.
"Ah ha!" Mum suddenly cried.
"What?" Abby moved her magnifying glass to where her mum was pointing.
There, tucked in the curve of the archway, perfectly hidden against the dark stone, sat Mr. Sticky. And right next to him was another water snail, even smaller than him.
"Mrs Sticky!" Abby breathed. "But where did she come from?"
"I'm beginning to suspect the pond weed don't you think?"
They both laughed and climbed into Abby's bed together, cuddling down under the duvet. It was cozy but a bit of a squeeze.
"Budge up," Mum said, giving Abby a push with her bottom.
"I can't, I'm already on the edge."
"My goodness you've grown then. When did that happen? You could have put an elephant in here last time we did this."
Abby put her head on her mum's chest and smiled.
Comments
i thought this story was brilliant!!!
i thought this story was brilliant!!!
awwwwwwwwwww!!!!! i loved this story xxxxxxxxxxxxx
awwwwwwwwwww!!!!! i loved this story
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I felt the story lacked substance. El
I felt the story lacked substance.
El
This story was good. My class of first graders liked it...
This story was good. My class of first graders liked it. Since it was a childrens short it was a little long. but good :]
i think it was a good story and my favorite character was..
i think it was a good story and my favorite character was Mr. Sticky
and he was so small as the gravel.
James from Texas, 7 years old
I love the impression this story has made. Ive read..
I love the impression this story has made. Ive read childrens stories before on this site, but have never seen so many comments from young readers. Its good to see children active with reading and participating in this exchange of ideas; makes me wonder what life is going to like like in 25 years.
I didnt think 3 pages was too long. I think people too often overlook chidrens capabilities and end up stunting their full potential.
This is a childrens story (to those who werent aware) and its cute, thoughtful, creative, and colorful. It can be taken as it is or analysed for the more subtle meanings within.
Great, overall!
" It is good only for small children below 3 years. ..
" It is good only for small children below 3 years.
Meghana. "
Not true... im 18. and now i want my own mr. sticky too!!!!!!!
Would make a wonderful picture book with some simplified..
Would make a wonderful picture book with some
simplified language, but just fine as it is otherwise!
Great story, cute and creative, good message--and
I love the Mr Sticky name.
good story i cant wriat enggish bt thy good story
good story
i cant wriat enggish bt thy good story
i like this story its cool jaia maryland age 10
i like this story its cool jaia maryland age 10
THIS IS A GREAT STORIE
THIS IS A GREAT STORIE
I LOVE THIS IT IS GREAT AND FUNNY
I LOVE THIS IT IS GREAT AND FUNNY
this story is so good. i love this story. it has such good..
this story is so good. i love this story. it has such good details and vivid verbs that i could see me at the setting or the place listening to what she is saying to every body that she talks to during this story.its great i highly recomend this short story.
GREAT!!!!!!!! i loved it you did a very good job!!!!! i..
GREAT!!!!!!!! i loved it you did a very good job!!!!! i could read this again and again it was NOT 2 LONG!!!!!!! i love short stories and this 1 i think i could read again and again hpe 2 c some more
randi.w.bentonville,Arkansas
love ya
Cute and original story! Even though Im 31 I can..
Cute and original story! Even though Im 31 I can relate....I remember what it felt like to be little and unnoticed!
really such a cute story....superb. i love Mr. Sticky ..
really such a cute story....superb.
i love Mr. Sticky
Surya.K........Chennai,India
nice story!
nice story!
I love The charcter Mr Sticky MAURICO MARSHALL RICO2!!
I love The charcter Mr Sticky MAURICO MARSHALL RICO2!!
cutte story a little wierd though
cutte story a little wierd though
I liked the sticky charcter in the story especially at the..
I liked the sticky charcter in the story especially at the end. This is one of the best stories ive ever read so thanks. Please put more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THANKSS!!!MAURICO**
i realy like mr. sticky i think it is injoyable.
i realy like mr. sticky i think it is injoyable.
i love your story very much! Mr.Sticky was small and..
i love your story very much!
Mr.Sticky was small and cute
well done!!
i don´t like it so much it needs more energy it wasn´t amazing
i don´t like it so much it needs more energy it wasn´t amazing
thhe story is ok and is really first person stating the..
thhe story is ok and is really first person stating the whole thing. But I think its a good book for any age, even for an little baby or kid.
I decided to print this up for my 7 year old daughter after..
I decided to print this up for my 7 year old daughter after reading it. We ran out of stories on her book case for spring break and needed some heart-warming themes. This will be a great project idea for her to illustrate it for herself.
Thanx for impressive story!. I know she will relate to it!
cool
cool
nice cody stiles
nice
cody stiles
I thought it waz a great story to read in freetime....even..
I thought it waz a great story to read in freetime....even though I dont usually read...
Mariah!!
Mr Sticky is a very cute and very funny story. Even though..
Mr Sticky is a very cute and very funny story. Even though I am 8 it is very impressive! Thank you for the story.
Kelsey Kline, Age 8
Orlando Florida
What a great beginning! We are looking forward to finishing..
What a great beginning! We are looking forward to finishing it!
Mrs OLearys year 5/6 class xoxo
I have fish of my own and i was looking for short stories...
I have fish of my own and i was looking for short
stories. Im 13 and we hafta write our own...*sigh*
lol it was good
nice story very good !!!!!!
nice story
very good !!!!!!
LOVED IT if someone think that the story wasnt cool and..
LOVED IT if someone think that the story wasnt cool and funny than u need to not read it. In my opinion what the esence of the storie is that the mom was not having much attention to the girl and that made it seem like she could compare her slef to mr.Stiky.
ive only read the start of the story but it sounds really..
ive only read the start of the story but it sounds really intresting and i cant wait till i finish it (im in the middle of reading it to my little cousin)
it was a tight story pretty cool
it was a tight story pretty cool
cool
cool
Lauren:it was very interesting and well written. I enjoyed..
Lauren:it was very interesting and well written. I enjoyed it.
Sheza:At first i thought it wasnt very fun, but as i kept on reading i became more eager to know what was going to happen next. ^o^
Erskine park high(Ersko)
i think that mr sticky is a good short story. we enjoyed..
i think that mr sticky is a good short story. we enjoyed all of it.
i dont know why anyone wouldnt want to read that short story!!
that was the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ha guys ily this story so much its so cooooooooooooool ;]
ha guys ily this story so much its so cooooooooooooool ;]
Mr.sticky was a fantastic story, to be read to little..
Mr.sticky was a fantastic story,
to be read to little kidlets but for me and my friend it was just a little boring...
if it had more creative adventures or something...
it would have been a pefect story
iilOveeuu Muchly sam and emma
I think that Mr Sticky is a quite boreing short story. I..
I think that Mr Sticky is a quite boreing short story. I did not understand what they were saying or the meanng of the story. I did not enjoy one bit of the story. You need to make Mr Sticky more interesting.
Ashley 08.
Lauren:it was very well written. i enjoyed it, NOT Sheza:..
Lauren:it was very well written. i enjoyed it, NOT
Sheza: at first i thought it was going to be boring, but as i kept on reading on - i became more eager to know what will happen next ! ^o^
Erskine Park High (Ersko)
I think that Mr Sticky is a quite boring story. I didnt..
I think that Mr Sticky is a quite boring story. I didnt understand anyhtink of it and i also didnt think it was a short story to me it sounded like a long story.
karla 8
i thought mr sticky was nice and cool!
i thought mr sticky was nice and cool!
it was boring
it was boring
It was cool and funny
It was cool and funny
this story was so good
this story was so good
this story was really good
this story was really good
this is a very good story! I loved it!
this is a very good story! I loved it!
it was vary good but not for us lol danni& caitlin
it was vary good but not for us
lol danni& caitlin
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