Mr Sticky
No one knew how Mr. Sticky got in the fish tank.
"He's very small," Mum said as she peered at the tiny water snail. "Just a black dot."
"He'll grow," said Abby and pulled her pyjama bottoms up again before she got into bed. They were always falling down.
In the morning Abby jumped out of bed and switched on the light in her fish tank.
Gerry, the fat orange goldfish, was dozing inside the stone archway. Jaws was already awake, swimming along the front of the tank with his white tail floating and twitching. It took Abby a while to find Mr. Sticky because he was clinging to the glass near the bottom, right next to the gravel.
At school that day she wrote about the mysterious Mr. Sticky who was so small you could mistake him for a piece of gravel. Some of the girls in her class said he seemed an ideal pet for her and kept giggling about it.
That night Abby turned on the light to find Mr. Sticky clinging to the very tiniest, waviest tip of the pond weed. It was near the water filter so he was bobbing about in the air bubbles.
"That looks fun," Abby said. She tried to imagine what it must be like to have to hang on to things all day and decided it was probably very tiring. She fed the fish then lay on her bed and watched them chase each other round and round the archway. When they stopped Gerry began nibbling at the pond weed with his big pouty lips. He sucked Mr. Sticky into his mouth then blew him back out again in a stream of water. The snail floated down to the bottom of the tank among the coloured gravel.
"I think he's grown a bit," Abby told her Mum at breakfast the next day.
"Just as well if he's going to be gobbled up like that," her Mum said, trying to put on her coat and eat toast at the same time.
"But I don't want him to get too big or he won't be cute anymore. Small things are cute aren't they?"
"Yes they are. But big things can be cute too. Now hurry up, I'm going to miss my train."
At school that day, Abby drew an elephant. She needed two pieces of expensive paper to do both ends but the teacher didn't mind because she was pleased with the drawing and wanted it on the wall. They sellotaped them together, right across the elephant's middle. In the corner of the picture, Abby wrote her full name, Abigail, and drew tiny snails for the dots on the 'i's The teacher said that was very creative.
At the weekend they cleaned out the tank. "There's a lot of algae on the sides," Mum said. "I'm not sure Mr. Sticky's quite up to the job yet."
They scooped the fish out and put them in a bowl while they emptied some of the water. Mr. Sticky stayed out of the way, clinging to the glass while Mum used the special 'vacuum cleaner' to clean the gravel. Abby trimmed the new pieces of pond weed down to size and scrubbed the archway and the filter tube. Mum poured new water into the tank.
"Where's Mr. Sticky?" Abby asked.
"On the side," Mum said. She was busy concentrating on the water. "Don't worry I was careful."
Abby looked on all sides of the tank. There was no sign of the water snail.
"He's probably in the gravel then," her mum said. "Come on let's get this finished. I've got work to do." She plopped the fish back in the clean water where they swam round and round, looking puzzled.
That evening Abby went up to her bedroom to check the tank. The water had settled and looked lovely and clear but there was no sign of Mr. Sticky. She lay on her bed and did some exercises, stretching out her legs and feet and pointing her toes. Stretching was good for your muscles and made you look tall a model had said on the t.v. and she looked enormous. When Abby had finished, she kneeled down to have another look in the tank but there was still no sign of Mr. Sticky. She went downstairs.
Her mum was in the study surrounded by papers. She had her glasses on and her hair was all over the place where she'd been running her hands through it. She looked impatient when she saw Abby in the doorway and even more impatient when she heard the bad news.
"He'll turn up." was all she said. "Now off to bed Abby. I've got masses of work to catch up on."
Abby felt her face go hot and red. It always happened when she was angry or upset.
"You've hoovered him up haven't you," she said. You were in such a rush you hoovered him up."
"I have not. I was very careful. But he is extremely small."
"What's wrong with being small?"
"Nothing at all. But it makes things hard to find."
"Or notice," Abby said and ran from the room.
The door to the bedroom opened and Mum's face appeared around the crack. Abby tried to ignore her but it was hard when she walked over to the bed and sat next to her. She was holding her glasses in her hand. She waved them at Abby.
"These are my new pair," she said. "Extra powerful, for snail hunting." She smiled at Abby. Abby tried not to smile back.
"And I've got a magnifying glass," Abby suddenly remembered and rushed off to find it.
They sat beside each other on the floor. On their knees they shuffled around the tank, peering into the corners among the big pebbles, at the gravel and the pondweed.
"Ah ha!" Mum suddenly cried.
"What?" Abby moved her magnifying glass to where her mum was pointing.
There, tucked in the curve of the archway, perfectly hidden against the dark stone, sat Mr. Sticky. And right next to him was another water snail, even smaller than him.
"Mrs Sticky!" Abby breathed. "But where did she come from?"
"I'm beginning to suspect the pond weed don't you think?"
They both laughed and climbed into Abby's bed together, cuddling down under the duvet. It was cozy but a bit of a squeeze.
"Budge up," Mum said, giving Abby a push with her bottom.
"I can't, I'm already on the edge."
"My goodness you've grown then. When did that happen? You could have put an elephant in here last time we did this."
Abby put her head on her mum's chest and smiled.
Comments
this was okay
this was okay
Hi i like this story i think it is very intresting thanx..
Hi i like this story i think it is very intresting
thanx for reading my coment by madison
I thougt this short storie was really creative and felt as..
I thougt this short storie was really creative and felt as if it was a true, real life sort of thing.
Thanx from Crystal
although this story is nice, I spotted several typing..
although this story is nice, I spotted several typing errors and when I read it to my child, he could not understand a single word I said. And I would not recommend reading this story (Unless you are from England) because it was not enjoyable to share with my child.
very weird
very weird
i was searching for a story to tell my little girl before..
i was searching for a story to tell my little girl before bedtime! I came across this one and it was great! she fell fast asleep!
love you Mr.sticky
love you Mr.sticky
The story is really very nice. The writer had written it..
The story is really very nice. The writer had written it very nicely and had used very, very nice words. I would like congratulate the Mo McAuley he had written a great story.
This is a wonderful story, i wish i could write such a..
This is a wonderful story, i wish i could write such a great story like this, i have to do one for english but am a bit stumped for ideas at the moment!
i THINK IT WAS A GREAT STORY .I ENGOYED IT.FROM SANNA
i THINK IT WAS A GREAT STORY .I ENGOYED IT.FROM SANNA
This is fantastic love it!!I love fish and what a great..
This is fantastic love it!!I love fish and what a great name mr sticky fab!! but i felt sorry when Abby fought she had lost mr sticky but then great ending 2 of them mr and mrs sticky excellent shall read again
tthhaatt wwaass ..
tthhaatt wwaass aawweessoommee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jack centreville VA
i can think it was very beatiful story ive ever..
i can think it was very beatiful story ive ever read...........;;;;;;;...
cool i needed a story for my little sister to here and this..
cool i needed a story for my little sister to here and this was the write story in the whole wide world
nice story. was great to read abt mr.sticky srikanth
nice story. was great to read abt mr.sticky srikanth
it was for real perhaps it couldnt be easily compared to..
it was for real perhaps it couldnt be easily compared to real life situation but still the story flows into a very well ended scenes...
Yes it does relate to "To Kill A Mockingbird" Thank you..
Yes it does relate to "To Kill A Mockingbird" Thank you love allan xxx aged 17
good story....great for my homework assignment!!!!! great story
good story....great for my homework assignment!!!!! great story
WOW!! That was a really creative story. I was stuck to the..
WOW!!
That was a really creative story. I was stuck to the screen as I read it. It gave me pictures in my head. That was really amazing and interesting to read.
It was FANTASTIC!!!
I think the story is great for children to read, the story..
I think the story is great for children to read, the story was introducing children to read more. To get the children involved with reading. This is a way for children to relate and active in reading. 9/2/08 tjohnson23203
I think the story wasnt that good because it took ages to..
I think the story wasnt that good because it took ages to get to the main part, also it wasnt a great story because it had no interesting parts in it.
Mr Sticky was a good story but it could of been better. It..
Mr Sticky was a good story but it could of been better. It couldd of had more humour and wow words.
well the story was great!!!! But the person who posted it..
well the story was great!!!! But the person who posted it on the internet is pathetic...i mean who would spell mom as mum!!!! i dont highly recomend this site for children to read..
This story was so cute!!!I really enjoyed it,from beginning..
This story was so cute!!!I really enjoyed it,from beginning to end.
j.v
i did not get the end and i found it boring
i did not get the end and i found it boring
i think this book is good but a bit short aswell you can..
i think this book is good but a bit short aswell you can make it more exiting.
kind of good.
kind of good.
This story is very interesting, but i think they could have..
This story is very interesting, but i think they could have explained where the other water snail cane from.
i think that this story is good
i think that this story is good
This staory is very good becasue it builds up tension,..
This staory is very good becasue it builds up tension, becasue it makes you wonder where is mr sticky where has he gone? Is he dead? Or is he hiding? also it is good becuase at the end it said abby put her hand on her mums cheast and smiled and I could actually feel the love in that room there and then.
I like this story because abby thought Mr sticky was sucked..
I like this story because abby thought Mr sticky was sucked up in the hoover but he was in a corner all this time and abby couldent find him and mum thought she sucked him up in the hoover aswell but she didnt and abby went of and her face turnt red her face alwase turns red when shes angry or sad and she was sad i loved the ending because there was a mrs sticky and that was why mr sticky was in the corner because he fell in love with mrs sticky and it ended like a true love story abby and mum were so happy that they found mr sticky.
comment by Kodie Edmends
I rated MR STICKEY at a 3 star because the storie was quite..
I rated MR STICKEY at a 3 star because the storie was quite boring and there was no adventure.All it was about was Abbey found a water snail,they washed out the tank,Abbey couldnt find her and then they found her.I was quite dissapointed!
I thought it was a really fantastic story but i would think..
I thought it was a really fantastic story but i would think that the authur could of improved and put complex sentences and every thing that could be included
this story is very interesting canyou give the book free
this story is very interesting canyou give the book free
i think it was kinda cool but not for me because it was..
i think it was kinda cool but not for me because it was boring!!too childish!!!
This was cute :]
This was cute :]
THIS STORY WAS GOOD AND IT IS VERY ENTERTAINING AND IM 15..
THIS STORY WAS GOOD AND IT IS VERY ENTERTAINING AND IM 15 YEARS OF AGE
hate it
hate it
At first it was kind of boring but if you think about it..
At first it was kind of boring but if you think about it analyze it, its pretty cool...she just wanted someone and something like her....but the story was a lil boring if I may say
the store is not that boring ok it is boring.
the store is not that boring ok it is boring.
What a wonderful story - i love how it has an underlying..
What a wonderful story - i love how it has an underlying story clevery tucked into the main plot. I will be looking out for more stories by this author!
Kathryn
Now i know where some short stories are on the internet...
Now i know where some short stories are on the internet. because my friend taylah is not a good read and she needs happy i can tell her about this webbsid and she can read one ever day
this story is great and now know not to say that my mum lost something of mine. so that means look first to say she or he lost
this story was very cute! i loved it! but where did the..
this story was very cute!
i loved it!
but where did the other snail come from?
im not a little kid but it was so cute! im going to read it..
im not a little kid but it was so cute! im going to read it over and over again
We like the story because we discovered that Mr. Sticky is..
We like the story because we discovered that Mr. Sticky is a Mrs. not a Mr. The other snail they found was a baby snail!
It is so so so so nice.
It is so so so so nice.
this story is good and beautiful , i very very like it .
this story is good and beautiful , i very very like it .
THE STORY WAS GOOD MY FAVORITE PART WAS WHEN WHEN SHE FOUND..
THE STORY WAS GOOD MY FAVORITE PART WAS WHEN WHEN SHE FOUND THE SNAIL
I have read this through and I think it was funny. If I..
I have read this through and I think it was funny. If I were you I would read it!
I LOVE MR STICKY!!! XXXXXXXX
It was quite good I enjoyed it, bUt it didnt grab me in any way. Also I wouldnt call a snail Mr Sticky. LOL!!!
WE LOVE MR STICKY XXXXXXXX
It was a good story. I loved every second of it. I liked..
It was a good story. I loved every second of it. I liked all the names in the story like Abby and Mr Stiky.
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