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The Tidy Drawer

One Saturday morning Abby's Mum came upstairs to see Abby in her bedroom. Or tried to. There was so much mess on the floor she could only poke her head around the door. Abby sat in the middle of it all reading a book.

"What a tip," Mum said. "You need to have a clear up in here."

"Why?" Abby asked.

"Why?" Mum repeated. "Because things get broken or lost when they're all willy-nilly like this. Come on, have a tidy up now."

"But I'm very busy," Abby argued, "and it's boring on my own. Can't you help me?"

"No I can't, I'm busy too. But I'll give you extra pocket money if you do a good job."

 

When Mum came back later all the toys and clothes and books had disappeared.

"I'm impressed," said Mum. "But I'll inspect it properly later."

"It was easy," said Abby. "Can I have my extra pocket money now?"

"All right. Get it out of my change purse. It's in the kitchen tidy drawer."

 

In the kitchen Abby went over to the dresser and pulled open the tidy drawer. She hunted for the purse.

"Any luck?" Mum asked.

Abby shook her head.

"It must be lurking at the bottom," Mum said. "Let's have a proper look."

She pulled the drawer out and carried it over to the table. Abby kneeled up on a chair to look inside. There were lots of boring things like staplers and string but there were lots of interesting things as well.

"What's this?" Abby asked, holding up a plastic bottle full of red liquid. Mum laughed.

"Fake blood, from a Hallowe'en party years ago. Your Dad and I took you to that, dressed up as a baby vampire. You were really scary."

"I don't remember that."

Abby carried on looking through the drawer. She found some vampire teeth, white face paint, plastic witchy nails and hair gel. Mum pulled out a glittery hair band. It had springs with wobbly balls on the top that flashed disco colours. She put it on her head while she carried on looking through the drawer. Abby found some sparkly hair elastics to match the hair band. She made her Mum put lots of little bunches all over her head so she looked really silly.

"I remember this," Abby said as she pulled out a plastic bag. "This is from my pirate party." Inside there was a black, false moustache and some big gold earrings.

She peeled the sticky backing off the false moustache and stuck it on Mum's top lip then found a paint brush in the drawer and painted a fierce red scar down her cheek using the fake blood. Mum clipped on the pirate earrings.

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"Come here," Mum said and smeared white face paint all over Abby's face. She dribbled the fake blood so it looked as if it was coming out of Abby's eyes and mouth. She put gel all over Abby's hair and made it stand up into weird, pointy shapes. Abby put in the vampire teeth and slipped on the witchy fingers. She made scary noises at Wow-Wow the cat. He ignored her and carried on washing himself on the seat next to her.

"Wotch thish?" Abby asked, holding up a flat rubbery thing. It was hard to speak through the vampire teeth.

"It's a whoopee cushion," Mum said. "You blow it up and sit on it. It makes rude noises." She blew it up and gave it to Abby.

Suddenly there was a knock at the back door. A voice called out. "Hello, it's only me. I've let myself in."

It was their nosy neighbour, Mrs Hislop. She was always interfering and complaining.

Mrs Hislop entered the kitchen. Her mouth dropped open.

"We're jush wooking for the change pursh," Abby explained.

"Yes, well, er," Mrs Hislop said, "I just wanted a word about your fence. Some of it's blown down on my side."

At that moment Abby sat on the whoopee cushion and let out an enormous, rude noise. Wow-Wow jumped off his seat and ran away.

"Well!" said Mrs. Hislop and hurried from the room and out of the house.

When the door banged shut Abby and Mum burst out laughing until Mum's moustache hung on by a whisker and Abby's vampire teeth dropped out.

Abby came to sit on her Mum's knee.

"It's fun doing this together," she said.

"Maybe. But we still haven't found the change purse." They both looked at the enormous heap of things spread over the kitchen table.

"Well, you know things will get lost, or broken, when they're all willy nilly," Abby said.

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"You cheeky monkey!" Mum laughed. "But what shall I do with it all?"

"I know, it's easy," Abby said and began to scoop everything off the table into her arms. She dumped it all back in the kitchen drawer.

Mum looked at her suspiciously.

"Let's go and inspect your bedroom shall we."

Abby followed her upstairs and into her bedroom. Wow-Wow was sitting in front of her fish tank looking hungrily at the goldfish. He dashed under the bed when he saw Mum and Abby. Mum kneeled down and lifted the bed cover to get him out. Underneath were heaps of Abby's toys, books, tapes, clothes and shoes, empty plastic cups and wrappers and a half-eaten sandwich on a plate.

"Abby! What's all this?"

"It's my tidy drawer," Abby said. She wrapped her arms around her Mum and gave her a kiss. "Let's sort this one out together now."

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Submitted by admin on Fri, 07/02/2010 - 11:49

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This wonderful short story has shown what little children do. The connection between Mom and her daughter provide colourful inmagination. This also provides the mutual understanding between these human beings.

Submitted by admin on Fri, 10/15/2010 - 11:21

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I like this story ! The reason why i liked it was because the mom was telling Abby how she should clean her room and when her mother thought that she was done cleaning her room she went digging for the change she promised Abby for cleaning her room !

Submitted by admin on Fri, 10/15/2010 - 11:34

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Dear Mo McAuley,
I like this story alot ! I think that the story is cute and perfect for a mom to read to her little girl. What an exellent story to read !

I think that you should keep up the good work! What a wonderful story .

Thank you for letting me have the chance to read this story.

Submitted by admin on Thu, 10/28/2010 - 20:49

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I just discovered this story and I love it. I am an Elementary School Teacher and this story is quite appropriate to teach values and morals, duties and responsibilities, family interactions and even celebrations. I will surely use this with my students.

Submitted by admin on Mon, 11/01/2010 - 11:21

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This was an ok story it really had no meaning but for cleaning can lead to fun witch can lead to not cleaning anymore the author could have put in more expershion to make it a better book but other than that is was ok :P : By Roberta 8b

Submitted by admin on Mon, 08/06/2012 - 00:01

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BW
A story about a messy room seems boring but I was pleasantly surprised with this story.

The comedy behind this story is really what keeps it going. The irony of it all is funny and I think it is a great story that children can relate to.

Overall I thought this story was average at best but has the ability to entertain young people no older than 6 but thats the beauty of a story like this, well done.

Submitted by admin on Mon, 08/06/2012 - 00:14

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A.S
Abby is a small girl that loves reading, but when it comes totidying her room she is not ready to do it. But when you tell her to do it for pocket money she will jump straight to do it.
I liked this story very much it used a wide range of similies,metaphors and lots of adjectives. This story also teaches children to tidy their room because they can earn money but sometime they can do it to make your parents proud. I would recomend thisto anyone who likes reading.

Submitted by admin on Mon, 08/06/2012 - 00:26

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BK
It was a good story

It was about Abby and her mum. Abby cleans her room for extra pocket money and she was going to get payed then they looked in her tidy drawer but it wasnt there.....

I didnt like the story because it was boring but great with the puncuation.

Submitted by admin on Sun, 02/08/2015 - 15:52

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"This is a wonderful story. This story perfectly captures the time you spend with children as a parent. It is not about an organised event or a special day but the moment is special and can only really be illustrated in writing. Well done. Best story Ive read on here!" I agree with this person. Very nice story.
-Poorni

Submitted by admin on Thu, 01/07/2016 - 21:59

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Nice

Submitted by admin on Tue, 09/13/2016 - 03:56

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like it

Submitted by admin on Wed, 02/15/2017 - 09:13

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slow

Submitted by admin on Tue, 02/13/2018 - 11:44

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Submitted by admin on Thu, 06/15/2023 - 03:07

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Cute story.

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