End of the Line
When Frank and I stepped through the post office doors, there was a crowd gathered, gawking at the new fixture on the wall like a chorus of wide-mouthed frogs. I had to get closer, and that was where being a girl that's scrawnier than a wire fence came in handy. Fortunately, Frank, my twin of eleven years, was just the same.
"Come on." I said, grabbing his hand, and we slid through the cracks between people until we spilled out in front.
Finally I got a good look. It was fixed to the plaster next to the postmaster's window, the place of honor usually reserved for the Wanted posters. Beady-eyed Zedekiah Smith, the bank robber, still hung there, but even he had been pushed aside for something more important.
A telephone. The first one in town.
"How's it work?" Noah Crawford called out. Noah's the best fix-it man around, and I could tell he was itching to get his fingers on those shiny knobs.
"Don't rightly know," answered the postmaster, and he tugged at his goatee as if it might tell him. "I do know the sound of your voice moves along wires strung on poles. It's sort of like the telegraph, only you hear words instead of dots and dashes."
"Ah," the crowd murmured, and I felt my own mouth move along.
I gazed at that gleaming wood box and something happened inside me. Something — I can only guess — that might be like falling in love. The thought of talking into that box — of making my voice sail through wires in the sky — it took over my brain. I couldn't get it out.
"Frank," I whispered to my twin. "I have to use that telephone."
Five minutes later, Frank towed me up Main Street, toward home. "Liza — " he began, but I cut him off. We two thought so much alike, I had Frank's questions answered before he even asked.
"You're right," I said. "It costs five cents and I don't have it. But look." I pulled him over to the window of Poulson's Variety Store. "You see those?"
I pointed to a handful of shimmery rocks spread on black velvet. Some were a shiny gray shot through with gold streaks, others yellow as cheese curds. And one, clear and jagged, sat like an icicle, leftover from wintertime.
Frank's eyebrows screwed up and I could tell he wasn't following.
"If I found one of those, I bet they'd pay me for it." I explained.
With a shake of his head, Frank hooked two thumbs under his suspenders. "But Liza — "
I held up a hand — he couldn't tell me anything I didn't already know. "I've got that figured, too. I'll bet we could find some at North Creek — in the mine."
Frank shrugged, pretending not to care, but I knew better. He wanted to explore that old mine, same as me. Besides, Frank knew he had no choice. Twins stick together, especially scrawny ones, 'cause it takes two of us to make one of most people.
We spent half the morning on the dusty road to North Creek. Ma packed a lunch but said she couldn't understand walking all that way for rocks. She thought we were off to search the dry creek bed, and I didn't correct her.
I felt a bit guilty about fooling my ma, but whenever a pang hit, I conjured up the vision of my voice dancing along wires in the sky. It looked a lot like me, my voice did, only wearing a pink tutu and carrying a frilly umbrella.
We reached the old mine around noon. The hole in the sage-covered hill had been shored up by timbers. They were weathered and splintery, and looked like a picture frame around nothing.
I stepped inside, my arms turning to goose bumps from the chill. The air smelled of mildew and rotted beams, but also of horse sweat and wood smoke. Strange. That mine had sat empty for years.
Once my eyes got used to the dim, I gazed around, hoping to see shimmery rocks littering the floor, but dust was all I saw. Frank walked past me to where the walls narrowed, then disappeared around the curve. I followed fast.
I'd come up right behind Frank when, ting, his boot connected with metal. He stooped, grabbed, and when he stood, his palm held more than we'd hoped.
A gold coin. Frank's eyes nearly popped.
"Where did that come from?" I whispered and reached out a finger to touch.
Just then, voices sounded in the next cavern over: "Zed, hold it higher." Two men stepped through a gap in the far wall.
They weren't miners. I could tell that from one glance. They were dressed for riding, with leather chaps and spurs. One held saddlebags over a shoulder and had a mustache that hung past his jaw. The other wore a battered hat, his face hid in its shadow. When he raised his lantern, the light shone full on those beady eyes.
It was Zedekiah Smith, the bank robber.
I plastered myself to the wall, hoping to disappear into shadow. Frank hunched over, hiding his head in his sleeves. But for once, we weren't scrawny enough.
"Hey!" The mustached man pointed, then dropped his saddlebags and ran for us.
I tried to run, too, but met up with Frank's backside. The next thing I knew, Frank and I were on the ground, being hauled to our feet by a sharp-nailed hand.
"Lookee here, Zed," our captor cried, "a couple of spies."
"No," I said, brushing myself off. "We're not spies. We were looking for rocks to sell. There's a new telephone in town, and I just wanted to — Ow!"
The mustache man yanked my hair. "Does she always talk this much?" he asked Frank. Frank — the traitor — nodded.
"Looking for rocks, eh?" Mustache Man pried open Frank's fingers. The gold coin glowed warm in the lantern light. "Lookee here, Zed. Musta fallen out."
Zedekiah Smith strode over and picked the coin out of Frank's palm. "You don't want that, boy. That's dirty money."
"You made it that way," I told him. "You stole it."
Zedekiah Smith narrowed his eyes, turning them even beadier. "Caleb's right. You do talk a lot."
Five minutes later, Frank and I were back to back on the ground.
"That's what you get," Caleb said, as he tied our hands behind us. "Shouldn't go poking your noses in bad places."
"It wouldn't be bad without you," I said, and Frank twitched.
"Sure it would," Caleb said. "Old mine's a dangerous place. You could've got caught in a cave-in, or bit by rattlers. Lucky you got us instead. He, he!" He tightened his knots then stood straight. "Someone will find you in a day or so. We'll be long gone by then. Right Zed?"
"That's right." Zedekiah Smith stood back, watching Caleb do the dirty work, his eyes shaded again.
"Just let us go," I begged. "We won't tell."
"Ha!" Caleb shouldered the saddlebags. "I'd like to see you keep your mouth still."
Zedekiah Smith took up the lantern and without looking back they passed through the opening in the rock wall. I listened until the jingle of their spurs faded.
We were alone in dark so thick it stopped up my nose. Caleb was right. This was a bad place. I wouldn't last a day. And worse, when Ma found my lifeless body, she'd know I was a liar.
I was about to sink into despair, but Frank distracted me with more twitching.
"There," he said. "I'm free."
I couldn't believe it when the ropes went slack. Jumping to my feet, I rubbed my wrists, trying to figure how Frank had managed to surprise me so. It wasn't that he'd worked his bony wrists out of Caleb's knots. That was plain Frank. The real surprise was that he'd come up with the idea without my help.
"Phew," I said, relief washing over me at my second chance at life. Ma wouldn't have to find my lifeless body after all. And as for the liar part, well, I'd work on that.
But first, I had another good deed in mind, the best way to begin my new life. I was about to turn in that outlaw.
I grabbed Frank's arm and towed him toward the exit. "We need to get to town and report Zedekiah Smith." Then something else occurred to me. "Think of the telephone calls I could make with that reward money."
'Liza — " Frank started up, but I knew where he was heading.
"Of course we'll split it."
We rounded the wall and ran smack into another, one with chaps and a hat. Zedekiah Smith was back. Before we could move, he had us trussed in his arms like two pigs for slaughter.
"Let go!" I cried, pounding his chest.
"Shh," he whispered. "Caleb thinks I forgot something."
I froze. "But . . . "
"I came back to cut you loose."
For once, I had a hard time filling my mouth with words.
"Now, you stay hidden until I get Caleb away," he whispered. "It won't do to have him telling people about my weak stomach."
"Are you feeling poorly?" Frank asked and Zedekiah Smith laughed.
"No, but I've got no stomach for hurting people." His arms went limp, releasing us, and he took a step back. "You'd better do your duty and report me. But take this in case that reward money's long in coming." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a pale yellow rock studded with honey-colored crystals. "I saw it out in the dry creek bed. Might be worth a telephone call."
He dropped it into my hand and gave a wink. Then he turned and walked out into the sunlight. Frank and I gawked, like a duet of wide-mouthed frogs.
We didn't make it to the Sheriff's office until the next morning. I reported Zedekiah Smith, just like I should, but for some reason, it didn't feel like a good deed anymore.
Our next stop was the Variety Store. Old Mr. Poulson's eyes kindled when he saw the crystal rock. Twenty-five cents went to Frank, who wasted it on candy. I saved mine for something monumental.
The post office wasn't crowded anymore. Still, there were a few lookers as I walked to the counter and laid down my nickel.
"I'd like to make a telephone call," I announced.
"How about that," the postmaster said, stroking his goatee. "You'll be the first. Who would you like to call?"
"Who?" I echoed. And just like that, my vision dissolved. Pink tutu and frilly umbrella, both drifted off like a dandelion in the wind. My voice couldn't dance along wires — it had no place to go. Nobody I knew had a telephone.
I turned to Frank and found him grinning.
"You saw it all along," I accused.
He shrugged. "I tried to tell you."
"You did?" I thought back to the day before and realized that maybe he had. I'd been too busy using my own mouth to notice.
After taking one last, loving look at the telephone, I turned away from the counter. Maybe candy would be a good use for that nickel after all.
"Frank," I said, pondering those thoughts he kept having without me, "next time you have something to say, speak up. I'll try hard to listen."
The poster of Zedekiah Smith seemed to nod at me as we passed.
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that was a very good book not one bit of it was boring
that was a very good book not one bit of it was boring
that book was very intresting i would like to read more of it
that book was very intresting i would like to read
more of it
This story was lively,entertaining, suspenseful and very..
This story was lively,entertaining, suspenseful
and very well written with simple yet colorful
language.I enjoyed it.
I enjoyed your story, it must have been exciting when the..
I enjoyed your story, it must have been exciting when the things we take for granted had just been invented. We are so spoiled with the variety of things these days that we dont even blink when we see something new for the first time. I would love to be in awe of a new invension and can invisage how your character would have felt. Thank you for bringing that emotion out.
Simon
great book! I think that was a little bit boring. I kind of..
great book! I think that was a little bit boring. I kind of want more of the feeling. It was enjoyable! Keep up the good job Allison!
The words in your story "danced" as if traveling the lines..
The words in your story "danced" as if traveling the lines of a telephone wire. You have a delightful way of expressing yourself and it made the story come alive, almost as if I were there. Thanks for sharing.
I really enjoyed this story. I loved the lines "dark so..
I really enjoyed this story. I loved the lines "dark so thick it stopped up my nose" and "scrawnier than a wire fence" and the description of the boards over the mine: "like a picture frame around nothing." The characters of the children are believable...you just love them right from the beginning, especially big-mouthed determined Liza. The ending, with her having nobody to call, was just a little predictable, but all in all, I think you are an excellent writer!
this story was amazing......... i just cant believe.....
this story was amazing......... i just
cant believe.....
Excellent.
Excellent.
I could see the girl and her twin, I could smell the musty..
I could see the girl and her twin, I could smell the musty mine air. Ms. Randall certainly knows how to tell a story.
This was just simply amazing! The story was just original,..
This was just simply amazing! The story
was just original, one of the best.
Alison Not Bad
Alison Not Bad
coherent story!
coherent story!
Was alright
Was alright
it was alright :)
it was alright :)
Good spelling, sentence structure and grammar. The plot was..
Good spelling, sentence structure and grammar. The plot was interesting and your descriptions good.
Brenda
I think this story teaches a good lesson about thinking..
I think this story teaches a good lesson about thinking before you act. Or, listening to others and not just yourself. It was a nice short story to read and detailed enough that i could infer that the setting was a while ago. :D
Really enjoyable - nicely paced, good realistic characters..
Really enjoyable - nicely paced, good realistic characters - loved it! Thanks
I really enjoyed this story. It was fresh, compelling, and..
I really enjoyed this story. It was fresh, compelling, and satisfying. It left me wanting to read more of your work.
Robin
Haha, I loved it. Even funnier... the girl reminded me..
Haha, I loved it. Even funnier... the girl reminded me right away another one I know that goes by the name Allison (no offense meant).
Very good story. I give it A+, 5-Stars, of course :-)
:)
:)
so beautiful it shows that you are a professional in the..
so beautiful it shows that you are a professional in the field is so
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Good storytelling, maam.
Good storytelling, maam.
what, no more stories to read, im gutted, i felt like i was..
what, no more stories to read, im gutted, i felt like i was there, immersed in the story. i was sad when i read the last word.
It would be unfair if I dont share my appreciation for this..
It would be unfair if I dont share my appreciation for this short. Well written on top of a great plot.
Kulsum
I loved it. The characters in such a small story!
I loved it. The characters in such a small
story!
Iliked this book.
Iliked this book.
wow..great story,im 11 too!!and i really like reading stories!
wow..great story,im 11 too!!and i really
like reading stories!
LOL, im 11 but this is homwork..:p
LOL, im 11 but this is homwork..:p
nice cool i want part 2
nice cool i want part 2
cool
cool
From one writer to another. A very good story. Good plot..
From one writer to another.
A very good story. Good plot twists.
Holds one’s interest. Well done.
Robert Sproule
good !
good !
This amazing story had printed in my summer holiday homework.
This amazing story had printed in my summer holiday homework.
I LOVE IT !! I WILL PRESENT THIS STORY AT MY ORAL TEST IN..
I LOVE IT !! I WILL PRESENT THIS STORY AT
MY ORAL TEST IN ENGLISH !!
I dont know what this book is saying.......so I cant finsih..
I dont know what this book is saying.......so I cant finsih my summer holiday homework
good story, liked it a lot easy to visualise those..
good story, liked it a lot easy to visualise those characters,good story and plot... some small humour hidden in there as well that I found :D
A bit boring..
A bit boring..
this story is horrible. everything went in and back out..
this story is horrible. everything went in and back out..
My kids were sad when the story ended. Great job!
My kids were sad when the story ended. Great job!
I loved that story
I loved that story
hahahah this story is funny
hahahah this story is funny
i like this story
i like this story
it was a good story:D
it was a good story:D
It was a great book I would definately recommend this book..
It was a great book I would definately recommend this book to alot of people who enjoy short storys or sometimes humourous books. So good job alison on your great book.
Scott,M.C.P.S
so many good words and combinations of words that i cant..
so many good words and combinations of words that i cant begin to name them all. You did an excellent job of inserting life and excitement into a very short work of fiction, not a common occurrence. just enough "old timey" language in the dialog to feel as if the story is set in an earlier time, but not so much as to be distracting or ridiculous.
This story was a joy to read. thank you
I really Enjoyed reading The story "the end of the line".
I really Enjoyed reading The story "the end of the line".
I like the style of writing based on its wordage. I prefer..
I like the style of writing based on its
wordage. I prefer a little more dynamics
in stories, but I understand not every
writer is like that, as every individual
has different tastes in writing. I felt it
was well written, and geared towards
children of 10-15. Some adults would not
like this story on a personal level value
but adults with children may see it with
some content value.
I love this story ! Thanks for a good story and i love the..
I love this story ! Thanks for a good story and i love the words you use in the story , It should be out there forreal not jus the internet ! : )
i like this book it is a good book no?
i like this book it is a good book no?
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