Do You Speak English?
Manuel had passed the fish on his way up the road. It was eighteen to twenty inches long and its silvery scales were covered with dirt. The gill flaps opened like two gash wounds on the sides of its head as it thrashed helplessly in the gutter. Next to it a boy leaned against the railings, his rod and line dangling out over the floating garbage and the stream of brown, stinking waste which trickled from a pipe in the wall below. The boy wore a faded pair of football shorts. He was perhaps nine or ten years old, barefoot and grubby, and his skin was marked with insect bites.
The fish gasped, then made one last convulsive leap, throwing itself in the direction of the river, and landed on the pavement with a thud. There it lay motionless for a moment, exhausted no doubt by the effort. The boy looked down at it, turned and kicked it back into the gutter.
Manuel had not paid much attention to the fish as he was preoccupied. He had just been to look at an apartment and he was considering how he could afford the rent. Accommodation was hard to find in the city and a place like this didn't come up very often. The apartment he and his wife were currently living in was so small their six-year-old son had to live with his wife's parents during the week. They had been trying to move for two years. He took out a cigarette and leaned against the railing, looking down the street at the boy fishing.
Further along the quay two figures were approaching. He watched as they wandered slowly towards him. They looked to be in their early thirties and were obviously tourists, Americans he would guess. The woman had shoulder-length reddish hair and pale freckled skin. She was slim and athletic looking. Her partner was tall and flabby, his stomach protruding from under his T-shirt. He wore knee-length shorts, sunglasses and his long hair was tied in a pony tail. They came slowly along the dusty street of warehouses. Tourists were not uncommon in the city but they usually kept to the old port with its rococo churches and stately customs house, or took the organized cruises along the reef. It was rare to see them in this district and Manuel assumed they were lost.
'Look at the poor thing,' said the woman, stopping beside the fish, which lay where the boy had kicked it, probably now gasping its last breaths. She spoke with a lazy, nasal drawl. The boy had not turned around but he had noticed their presence. He stared fixedly across the glittering surface of the water towards the lines of washing in the narrow streets on the opposite bank, waiting for them to go.
'It ought to be thrown back,' the woman was saying. 'Do you think he wants it?' She turned to her companion who shrugged. He looked nervous.
'I don't like the look of this neighborhood,' he said. 'I think we should get back.' But the woman wasn't going to let it pass. She stood there looking from the fish to the boy and back again.
'You could try asking him,' the man said. The woman stepped around the fish and approached the boy, who was still looking out across the river. The child's body tensed as the woman came up to him.
'Do you know that fish is dying?' Manuel heard her ask. The boy looked up at her blankly and then shook his head. 'Dy-ing,' she repeated, drawing out each syllable, but the boy remained dumb, uncomprehending. He fidgeted awkwardly with his feet.
'I don't think he understands,' said the woman to her partner. The man shrugged as if to say 'I told you we shouldn't get involved'. She looked around for assistance and noticed Manuel watching her. She stared at him for a moment, taking in the cream-coloured linen suit, the shoes. She was obviously unsure what to make of him.
'Do you speak English?' she asked, this time with a more respectful tone than she had used with the boy. Manuel said that he did but in a voice which gave her no reason to expect his help. She held his gaze for a few moments.
'Can you ask this boy what he means to do with the fish? It seems so cruel, it ought to be thrown back.' He looked across at the boy and then at the woman. He wondered if he should tell her about the kind of life this boy led, about the squalid shacks down by the beach from where he had probably come that morning, about the parents struggling to make ends meet. Two days earlier he had read in the local paper about a fishing community a few miles up the coast which was being evicted to make way for a new hotel. The boy was watching them anxiously.
'Esta senhora quer saber o que voce vai fazer com o peixe,' he said to the boy. He treated the boy gently, with consideration. The boy wiped a dirty hand across one eye and looked at Manuel.
'E para vender,' he responded.
'He intends to sell it,' he told the woman. He tried to make his answer sound final, as though that was the end of the matter. The woman hesitated, perhaps uncertain how to interpret the lack of encouragement in his voice. Manuel observed her confusion. Her eyes searched his face as though looking for some clue. Her companion shifted nervously behind her.
'Honey, I think we should go,' he said. But the woman ignored him. He shuffled uncomfortably. 'You know I really don't think you should interfere.'
'How much does the boy want for the fish?' the woman asked. Manuel glanced at her companion with his stooped shoulders and useless bulk. The woman's determination amused him but he did not smile.
'A senhora quer comprar o peixe. Quanto e?' The boy named a price which was five times what he would have got for it locally. His expression was deadpan. Only a slight clenching of his right hand betrayed the tension he was probably feeling. Manuel told her the price, adopting the same tone of voice with which he had addressed her previously, but this time he could not help smiling. She seemed to interpret this as friendliness. She opened her purse and took out some money, peeling off a note of twice the value the boy had asked.
'Does he have any change?' she asked.
Manuel translated. Again the boy's right hand twitched slightly but otherwise his face wore the same expression of innocence it had before. He shook his head. The woman hesitated for a moment and looked across at the fish. Then she held out the note to the boy who took it. She stooped down, picked the fish up carefully between forefinger and thumb and threw it into the river. Without looking at either Manuel or the boy she turned to her companion and they went on up the road together. The man produced a handkerchief and offered it to the woman to wipe her fingers but she refused it. They appeared to be arguing. The boy stood holding the note. His expression had hardly changed. Manuel watched the couple until they disappeared out of sight. They did not once look back. He lit another cigarette and returned to his former position against the railings.
The fish had not survived its lengthy time out of the water and was now floating amidst the debris a few feet out from the bank, washed in against the shore by the backward eddy of the current. The boy climbed over the railings and down onto a ledge just above the water line. He began dragging the dead fish towards him with a stick. When it was finally within reach he caught hold of it and tossed it up onto the road. As he clambered over the railings he grinned at Manuel. The boy gathered up his rod and the fish and set off up the street. Manuel watched him while he finished his cigarette. Then he threw the butt down into the dirty water and made his way back the way he had come.
Comments
This story was well written and very realistic.
This story was well written and very realistic.
Great story. I love it!
Great story. I love it!
not really much of a story for me there...?it was OK..
not really much of a story for me there...?it was OK though,i read it!
Nice read. Paints the mood of the place beautifully. - Deb
Nice read. Paints the mood of the place
beautifully. - Deb
A good story well told, and believable too. Not sure that..
A good story well told, and believable too. Not sure
that the title is right. Its more about catching a big
fish, in this case, the silly tourist.
i like it
i like it
I really liked reading this story - it was very intriguing..
I really liked reading this story - it was very intriguing
and really drew me into. The fish focus was a very
good focus since for me it added a bit of surreal
drama, since in my mind the fish is huge, dominating
the events (maybe this could be adapted as a short
film?). I liked the way that the boy got much more
than the day at first offered him - so good to see
justice of sorts being done! Well done - you ought to
write some more. Sarah
Absolutely fantastic.
Absolutely fantastic.
good but little bit critical
good but little bit critical
Very poignant yet so true, beautifully crafted Simon and..
Very poignant yet so true, beautifully
crafted Simon and its a pleasure reading
like always :-)
cheers,
Sudeshna
I really enjoyed reading this story, really drew me in and..
I really enjoyed reading this story, really drew me in and had a lot of meaning.
I thoroughly enjoyed it....kept my attention until the end...
I thoroughly enjoyed it....kept my attention until the end. Liked how you described the boy and his surroundings through Manuel´s ¨eyes¨.
-Andrea
I really liked this story. It gave me a lot to think about..
I really liked this story. It gave me a lot to think about after I was done. How we dont always see the whole picture of our interactions with others. And how spoiled we are over here on this side of the border. Well written, and edited, all the technical stuff was clean. I looked for more from this author, wanted more.
Excellent story. Living in a developing country myself I..
Excellent story. Living in a developing country myself I can totally put myself in the shoes of the two locals.
hi Simon, I liked the story! I felt it was technically..
hi Simon,
I liked the story!
I felt it was technically well-rounded.
I agree that the title could be rethought.
Theres something that I suspect still needs maturing somewhat -- perhaps my own interpretation? ;)
I cant quite put my finger on it, but Im leaning towards WHY the story is being told.
Good story, well written. It says much about human nature.
Good story, well written. It says much about human nature.
This is a motherflippin masterpiece, how something this..
This is a motherflippin masterpiece, how something
this uninteresting gets this exciting, you should right
novels man, i will buy them!
Keep up the work!
/ Mr Ithinkthiswasfantastic
A lovely, little tale. The boy, the man, and the tourists..
A lovely, little tale. The boy, the man, and the tourists were all clearly drawn in my mind. I hope to read more of your work.
good one, I think the title is right. It draws attention..
good one, I think the title is right. It draws attention and makes people start reading.
I really liked this. I think it is well structured and..
I really liked this. I think it is well structured and controlled. I like the way it hints at a much bigger picture through the spoiling of the beautiful fish. Id like to read more stories by you on this site.
Hilary
Great story! I used it in my ESL class. The students liked..
Great story! I used it in my ESL class. The students liked it and I had them write their own version taking the point of view of either the boy or the tourist woman. It went very well.
I have to say that I personally thought that it carried on..
I have to say that I personally thought that it carried on a little to much in the middle. I really enjoyed the ending though!
love every port of this story it rely touched my heart so much.
love every port of this story it rely touched my heart so much.
this story reminds me of a story called life! keep up the..
this story reminds me of a story called life!
keep up the good work pablo
hi, i am in yr 11. i dont know much about technically..
hi, i am in yr 11.
i dont know much about technically rounded and coventionally surprising. im soory thats probably what you want to hear.
however, i would like to say as a kid i laughed at that women and her husband, related to the dirty boy and thaught him smart, manuel is someone strange and intriguing however.
im australian and think americans are funny people.
thanks for making me laugh, seriously
I enjoyed this story. I liked how it showed all points of..
I enjoyed this story. I liked how it showed all points of view...sort of made you empathize with all the characters at once.
This is a very well structured story. Having lived in a..
This is a very well structured story.
Having lived in a developing country and
now living in the states. I can fully
understand the views of both the locals
and the Americans.
This story just made me think of my own
life.
Thank you.
I enjoyed this story. Its always fun to see poor locals..
I enjoyed this story. Its always fun to see poor locals put one over on oblivious tourists, and Manuel is employed cleverly as translator and moral center of the story. Some of the writing is a little lazy -- "squalid shacks," for instance, or "parents struggling to make ends meet." Nothing another draft couldnt fix.
I love the title because they are the words of the tourist..
I love the title because they are the words of the tourist woman. Whats funny is that spoiled Americans like her always assume that no matter where you go someone there speaks English. Thank, great story. Want more.
hi ineed speek english can you help
hi ineed speek english can you help
I read this story. It gives me happy. I like this type of..
I read this story. It gives me happy. I like this type of story. It is very helpful who wants to learn english.I get three characters-onelives in a rented house, a boy and a touristcouple.
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That was very interesting, I can see this kind of..
That was very interesting, I can see this kind of situations when foreigners come to Mexico, this was very real, and I really enjoyed it, but also there were some lazy words, anyway it was very well written.
You took me there... a little slice of life, somewhere at..
You took me there... a little slice of life, somewhere at any given time. i have nothing constructive to add, so thank you for the story and good luck in your career.
-Alex
I really liked this. Simple, honest and interesting.
I really liked this. Simple, honest and interesting.
the title totally caught my attention and the story was sad..
the title totally caught my attention and the story was sad and funny at the same time. very true with what happens with tourist they get tricked and dont even notice it. it also shows child labor which is a big problem nowadays
nice story i liked it zeshan baloch
nice story i liked it
zeshan baloch
i have shocked i little bit by the ten-year-old boy and..
i have shocked i little bit by the ten-year-old boy and what he had done,in our country, 10-year child lives a life of no worries.
How do I contact the author? nIm interested to ask her a..
How do I contact the author? nIm interested to ask her a few questions bout this book. =)
It was good az bro
It was good az bro
A little slice of reality and good read. -Zaanti
A little slice of reality and good read.
-Zaanti
Ditto on everyone elses positive feedback. A first-class..
Ditto on everyone elses positive feedback. A first-class story! Totally original!
nice
nice
Im north American living in brazil for a year and this is..
Im north American living in brazil for a year and
this is something near to what I have
experienced too. The language in the storie was
Portuguese, Im wondering if the setting is brazil
Completely ordinary? Im not sure which genre this story..
Completely ordinary? Im not sure which genre this story belongs, or maybe I just dont grasp the meaning of the story. Manuel is an observer and translator for the story, the little boy fishes. Culture clash of tourists come and pay to throw a dead fish into the river.. walk off. The writing was great, but not to sure what I took away from the story other than just being kind of left half expecting.
i think the book was very good. but the ending was very sad..
i think the book was very good. but the ending was very sad because the fish died :(
Excellent read-- loved it!
Excellent read-- loved it!
Your story was very good and eye captavateing
Your story was very good and eye captavateing
I thank this was a ok story but not my tip of story. still..
I thank this was a ok story but not my tip of story. still i injoyed it.
boring!
boring!
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