The Flying Machine

this story had great logic

this is very nice story

This storie is very interesting and logical

thi s story is not so bad but it is not so good ...........i mean that is great

Everybody in this world need a second chance

Its funny because its true

A well imagined story. Short but productive - Selena

The writer adds interesting detail to a relatively short story. - Gabriel

Hahahaha!!!!!!! Very funny but very logical and insightful. This story is speaking about how clever men can always fool most of us foolish sheep, sorry I mean humans!

I think that this story is very funny,logical and a realistic story because this storys foundation is perfect. Therefore, we can easily understand about this storys contents and authors message.

I think its good story with good moral but its not exiting

this story is very intersting beacouse very nice

this is a exellent logical sory

The man passed over basic and

fundamental but people are giving him

2nd chance.

I think this story shows two lessons.

One is that we shouldnt pass over

basic and fundamental, the other is

that everyone needs 2nd chance.

this story have a good idea and its nice in some ways but its not interesting....

I think this is a interesting story but it isnt a humour story. I didnt smile. Maybe, i dont understand english humour.

The Flying Machine is a very nice story of Ambrose Briece, its setted in a normal city in the 50s. I like very much the moral because its totally true because the defects are fundamental and merely basic.I think the deffects are needed to make a thing good, when you achieve something is because you make a big effort, surely there were mistakes that made you try it again and again and finally you became a master. :)

It is a good story. You can learn about it. You know we are humans so it is normal to make a mistakes. The best of this is that the life always give us a second chance. The moral is that you dont give up. If you felt down...please stand up and try again. Dont worry about what people think about your mistakes. Feel you free.

The story shows real occasions and shows the important of being careful. I like It. Natalia GM.

NICE STORY IS IT! I LIKE THE SUMMARY.

ha!!!ha!!! yah really its funny dont know how to ease it lol:) this story is nice...and direct to the point.Good job...

dont worry, is only a mistakes, I think de second machine to build to be very good, good luck in the nex.

en en ,...this is a good story. Through the Ingenious Man was failed. But he still had a great effect on the human. As he said he left lots of experience for the followed people. the history of the human like this. We kept moving basic on the peoples fundamental infront of us.

This is a good story to show that how much to care a little primary thing before to do something complicated. The ingenious man is a realristic, and he also never give up. Thats a good point that you can get from this story. Lets think, if all of people in the world are easy to give up, we cant develop everything same as now for sure. However, I am amazing that this short story can give something more than in the context. Sometimes, the short stories can give the moral much more than some long stories.

This is a good story because it explain that you dont give up.

I think this is a good story, the man failed but everybody have a second chance so thats ok

The flying machine is a good story. Through the ingenious man was failed, but all the human made mistakes and you have another chance so dont

I like the fable, i think that is not about mistakes,this fable is about learn and fix our mistakes

Its a good fable about second chances.

the story was funny because the ingenious man said the defects are merely basic and fundamental but the flying machine was ruined.

Wow !! This story is very preceptive for my life. I learn many moral.

This fable is very good for me. I am usually afraid of making mistakes but everyone makes mistakes. Dont be afraid of making mistakes and then get courage for your life.

this story is very preceptive I learned many thing from this story. I think correcting basic is wise when we were failed. Haste cause failure.

i think this story is so good because it tries to explain something usual in life; when you make something wrong you must keep trying, not leave it, and finally it will probably be ok

i think its a very good story, it doesnt matter to make mistakes, they are useful if you learn something about them, and thats what i understand of this fable

This story teach us about believe un ourserlves, through we have mistakes, we have another chances, and we could do it better, We always learn form our mistakes, but We should never give up!!!. Rossy

i think it was a grat story but it shut of add a lil bite of more details

This is a good story to show that how much to care a little primary thing before to do something complicated. The ingenious man is a realristic, and he also never give up. Thats a good point that you can get from this story. Lets think, if all of people in the world are easy to give up, we cant develop everything same as now for sure. However, I am amazing that this short story can give something more than in the context. Sometimes, the short stories can give the moral much more than some long stories. by jairo

What i learned of this fable is..

You always can learn about your mistakes, though they be big...and always people can help you to obtain that

I think its great that so many people think the lesson here is to try and try again until you succeed; to not be defeated by failures and mistakes. It reveals your inner hope and optimism and makes me think about the cynicism that runs rampant in America--a country who views hope and optimism as naivety, these days.

But be wary of another message this story may present: dont believe the hype. Just because someone says so, doesnt mean it is. THINK rationally and independantly and then make an informed choice. Dont be like the crowd in the story who hear a man say something, they dont think about the meaning of what hes saying, and then they just dig in their pockets to give him more money without thinking twice.

Or perhaps the moral is: choose your words wisely, for some fool will always misinterpret, and if you speak carefully and thoughtfully you can get whatever you want from people.

It is a nice fable. You can learn about it. We are humans so it is normal to make mistakes. The best of this is that the life always give us a second chance.And in addition, we must keep trying to reach our aim. The moral is that you dont give up. If you felt down...please stand up and try again. Dont worry about what people think about your wrongness…

this story is interesting.the ýngenious man is very ambitionly and clever.ý like it because when ý read, ý feel good.

dont upset after you get mistake, stand up and try your best, because fail is success mother

I think this is good story. Its only a mistake, dont worry try again.

I think it is very important that a person shows assurance in everythings he does

I like this story, because I think there are two messages from it.
First, everyone make mistakes. Even if you are ingenious, you would make mistakes.
Second, mistakes make a success. When you make mistakes, you dont have to worry about it. Its a key to suceed. Be optimistic.
I think they are very important things to succeed in life.

I think if a Man want to invent a great thing , need to gather the subscription from others. And onself has to gather enough money and preparation object. So you are not afraid of mistake. It link to a big succese!

Learn from your mistakes, i belive they are useful.
Mr.Ervis

i think this a good storie because everyone can make mistakes .

This story is great, because the story tell us that we never give up, we can try many times until we reach our goals.