Revenge

Simple, but brilliant. Now i know how to sell anything i want to. Thanks

i really liked how it was right to the point and showed how true buissnesmen deal

that story was nice . my name is shafiqa

its rubbish

A bit brief, more characterisation but apart from that, fairly enjoyable.

i think that you have to learn how to deal with different kind of people and do whatever it takes to be succesful, including risks.

its exactly funny

It seemed almost too simple

i dont understand it

Fairly good story. Names would have been nice. It would be nicer to have a little more detail about what he wants for his revenge. Its a bit dificult to decifer. Overall fairly good.

revenge is not a good deal

I know how to do it for the future. thank you(^^)

I dont fully understand this story. Its short and names for the characters would have been cool. I feel there is a message Im just not pciking up when I read it.

It is a good story , I think it has a clear morl

The Insurance Agent is really bright. He dealt his job throught the indirect menance. But I think its immoral, its not good to deal own business throught the unhealthy way. The most important thing for the management is integrity, it makes you succeed.

I rate the story whit 3 stars. I think the story could be better written and also could be made more interesting for the readers. Michel

I rated the story with two stars, because it is not interesting. Jose Antonio

If you are looking for a funny story, dont read this one. Its not funny at all.

it was a way to learn some of what you can sell and how you cant always sell what you want.

I hope to see more brilliant stories from this artist. It is good to see great short stories...and a silent twist of revenge.

I am Jacob Ford, and rate this a 10:10.

The story is funny, but I think I have my own way to deal with this kind of person.

its a funny story, i liked it..

i like the last part its cool

I guess its funny
A.G.

I like the story,so i gave it a 5. i like it because it gives the point of view of a business person. And how someone will do anything to achive his/ her goal.

I think about those person ,try to sellproducts no matter how, o how many time they spended.

i believe this story is the hardes face of realty for a Insurance sale person.

1. i like the way a sale person gets

his way all the time.

its cool, but kinda short dude

Its difficult story.Story is very realistic. A story for adult.

Took me a while to get it. Guess it was funny.

dont get it at all.

Awkward use of language. Not bad, but would have liked more detail.

I think this story is interersting.
And some of the insurance sales men did like that before ..

I think Dont betray the custmers!!

i didnt understand it! wat was all this about, but surely i would have understood the details

This story is hilarious! I love Ambrose Bierce, he is my favorite American 18th century author!

it was very witty and very hilarious!

Its not that funny!!!!
Make it a bit more funny then publish it!!

I dont really get it what this story is about. I want to know more detail of this sotry. Could someone expalin for me??

the author is dead.

the story is gold.

he didnt intend to provide advice for dealings with others, nor was he holding the man up as a pilar of pure moral stability. the POINT is that the man is immoral.

Sometimes I feel as though there are so many lemmings who go, "Its great!" because years before them people have said, "its great!" because years before them people have said, "its great!"...

It wasnt.

.There is nothing funny about this story .

Acctually I didnt understand this story much so it s a little hard for me.

this is good

I cant find a moral in this story..
But,..there is a possible that he told a lie to sell his product.

i did not get that story ONE bit...i dont see a moral...i dont see anything funny....i didnt get it and it wasnt very funny.

it was funny because thats it not what the man was suspecting. It paints a great picture of a man listening to an innsurance agent (somthing alot of people can relate to) and when the man thinks that he has the agent beat the agent pulls his crazy statment. can you imagin if this happened to you- what do you even say in reply?

i dont get the humour stories i agree they arent funny!!

it was good storie but how will he have its hearts blood? :)

this is a really good story but next time make it long....